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mrkuok - all i'd ever need (original)

Contestant : mrkuok

thanks everyone who voted for me again last round :) here's something i wrote a while back for someone special - hope you like it and please keep voting - sorry i haven't been able to reply all your comments and messages but it's been really really hectic here but it means a lot to me and i promise i will get back to you guys soon :)

all i'd ever need

if i had some time
i would take you to the beach
roll up our sleeves
then we'd sit and watch the sea
wiggle our toes
feel the sand beneath our feet
a kiss on your lips and one on your nose
oh baby a perfect day it would be

if i had a wish i would make your dreams come true
now you smile because you know this song's for you
baby look, love is all i have to give
my porcelain heart says never apart
it's crazy - but the way that i wanna live

and i suppose it's not as easy as they say on the radio
but you're the sunlight that shines through their sentimental lies
and i won't let you go
cuz who really minds the thorns when they know that they're holding the rose

if i couldn't sing
i would write it in the sand
i'd spell it out cuz i know you'd understand
because it's true it's in giving you receive
cuz i gotta you and you gotta me
oh baby you're all i'd ever need.

Sun, 2010-04-04 13:57 — yellow

Your Style..

Hi.. having listened to all your performance here, just felt that your delivery is all about the same.. you do have potential but maybe you might want to explore & see how to bring out your best potential and maybe challenge yourself to something even better? Got to bring yourself to the next level, you know what I mean? Admire your passion to do songwriting anyway. Great job.

Mon, 2010-04-05 11:32 — voice

Delivery..

Hi..finally someone thinks like me, it's pretty the same throughout so its same level it takes time to learn a good guitar, u had that, i salute you for that, i love to see you in a band! screamo & heavy guitar riffs tunes! try smtg extreme, different :) tt's next level =D abt some cmmts well, u just hv t b unafraid to push yr voice louder? but i support ppl being themselves, so it's jus my tots since yr top voted 4awhile) do u tink im nat (?!?!!!mars gg too far.) yup, like a reply from you if u cn, instead of mars venus or sduck - if yr bz its fine yup. to mars, i dont like yr alleged. stop. i am Not tniel-ing

Sun, 2010-04-04 04:42 — marstonian

clearly nataniel is just

clearly nataniel is just another of voice's accounts... same kind of nonsensical english... same kind of "only lady gaga is good + support different people"

Sat, 2010-04-03 22:49 — abbysonia

you're awesome!

Sat, 2010-04-03 10:47 — nataniel

to be a fair

critic facebook, there are lots of talents out there what makes u think its just jack johnson have to win ?.? who? is jack johnson anyway? this age is the pop culture now, and it's dead to sound the same all the time about long distance song.. must stretch your voice with loud sounds.. jonahliang also flood with own comments what... i'm asking mrkuo, not ..tilleduck..who r u i mean whats yr rel name anywey the votes just shot up and beat the top voted.. im funny, and i found comments on pages where peopl hvent comment on him yet thanks for voting , you have to save some people in the rounds like a rap group i mean, this is just my onion thanks

Wed, 2010-04-07 04:31 — tillyduck

i didn't understand a SINGLE

i didn't understand a SINGLE THING that nataniel just said.

the only parts i got were:
i) who? is jack johnson anyway?
-- you not knowing who jack johnson is, just shows you CLEARLY know nothing about music. so save your advice la seriously. not everyone has to sound like lady gaga.
ii) i'm asking mrkuo, not tilleduck..who r u i mean whats yr rel name anywey
-- why would i want to use my real name. is nataniel even your real name or is that you, voice?

the rest of your 'onion' meant nuts to me. same goes to your other 'onions' on the other contestants pages. go learn how to use punctuation and listen to some real music. then maybe one day in the very distant future, someone will actually take you seriously.

my 'garlic/pepper/onion' thanks.

Fri, 2010-04-02 11:47 — voice

rep

i 'm nt repg to beautysou but i was waitg 4 ya!
ah. yr topping the highest voted. pass it 2 me!

Fri, 2010-04-02 10:51 — kristine_fuente

great job

I've seen your you tube channel..and wow..that's the only thing i can say..keep up the good work..great composition again..got my 539 vote you can vote also.. thanks..

Thu, 2010-04-01 22:18 — JemJackson07

Hi!

You're most welcome. You're so cool! Keep it up! Wish you all the best. God bless ya!

Wed, 2010-03-31 07:31 — nataniel

starting to review

actually you could make a effort to come up with fresh things every then, maybe more rockish?.. i wonder fo you reply anyway, but, I've yet to see you performing a pop rock song that shows the real stretched voice when the voice is loud.. cos people jus get away with a smooth calm and slow song without vocal stretch, my onion thanks.

Thu, 2010-04-01 17:33 — tillyduck

-______-

'come up with fresh things every then, maybe more rockish?'

that's just his style, laid back acoustic pop rock. you don't ask jack johnson to change his style just cos you think he sounds the same all the time.

and maybe he doesn't reply cos he doesn't wanna be flooding his on page with his OWN comments. how annoying would that be -__-

my 'onion' thanks.

Tue, 2010-03-30 23:01 — IYong

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